Today I read up to page 18 and it was about when Georgia was riding his bike and saw that a dragon was flying with his house and then they had to sleep in the car and dad was sleeping in the shed and mum and godfrey was sleeping in the car and Henry and his other brother were sleeping in a tent and every night when Georgia needed to go toilet he had to bend over his brothers face and then when he was coming back he will get grass everywhere on his face and then in the morning Georgia went to school and then he will get in Trouble for not bring his project to school.
Hi Victoria, my name is Charlie I am from Wainui Beach School, in Gisborne. I like how you explained where everyone was sleeping. 'Trouble at Home' sounds like an AWESOME book, I hope we have it somewhere in our library.
ReplyDeleteHow long is the dragon in their house, and what happens when Henry goes to the toilet?
Maybe next time you could add some punctuation like commas or full stops instead of saying AND quite a bit.